on a dining table made of glass
for a tree needs to grow its root
deep down rooted in the earth
You can't grow a tree in a kitchen
where the sun is blocked to enter
for a tree needs shafts of sunlight
to make a food in its green leaves
to make a food in its green leaves
You can't grow a tree in a kitchen
but you don't believe me and listen
the smile in your face make me worry
for it will turn to be angry and gloomy
as the tree will soon be weary
You can't grow a tree in a kitchen
but you don't believe me and listen
as well as you won't understand
that we should sometimes be kind
to let something go for peace of our mind
You just can't grow a tree in a kitchen
but you don't believe me and listen...
*Note:
This post is written for Thursday Short Story Slam Week-5 Children's Literature. Photo is taken from this website.
Besides, I also submit this post for Thursday Poets Rally Week 48.
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Update:
It's surprising that I have won The Perfect Poet Award of Week 48.
The following is my award. Thank you for the award, Poets Rally.
Find my Haiku for the award picture as follows... :)
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The Summer is Ready
dandelion clocks fly free
as light breeze blows gently
Oh, summer is ready!
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I vote for Cherlyn!
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Besides, I also submit this post for Thursday Poets Rally Week 48.
***
Update:
It's surprising that I have won The Perfect Poet Award of Week 48.
The following is my award. Thank you for the award, Poets Rally.
Find my Haiku for the award picture as follows... :)
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The Summer is Ready
dandelion clocks fly free
as light breeze blows gently
Oh, summer is ready!
***
I vote for Cherlyn!
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15 comments:
true, love your deep thoughts on the prompt, well done.
:)
Kids do not listen and want to do things their own way ... they always know better ... so adults have to repeat in order to get the message across.
The repetition of the first line in each stanza reminds me of an adult trying to get through to a stubborn child ... very appropriate !
This is so true I had my share of not so brilliant ideas as a kid (really I am still having them) but we've got to make those mistakes to grow
waahh.. indah sekali.. ajari saya bahasa inggris donk..hehee.. :)
Gue suka banget yg ini, Nen ...
To all: thank you for the compliment... :)
love this...
Hope to see you join poets rally week 48 today,
Visit me for details, share and make poetic friends, wow.
Blessings,
Have fun!
xoxox
Poet rally, thanks for your invitation. Hope this is okay that I submit this same poem for the Poets Rally 48...
Lovely poem, maybe some bonzai tree...? :)
There was little doubt where you were coming from on this piece. A very interesting take on the photo. Nicely done!
Children can indeed be hard-headed, but they usually learn from their mistakes.
Nicely done.
http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/02/freedom-to-love-only-you.html
Maybe we can nourish the seed to a little time, and then replant it in a garden! :)
My Rally Poem ~ A Poetic World
anything is welcome in the rally, how cool,
superb entry,
Happy Rally.
Beautiful and elegant way of expressing your views in the form of a poem. I will read it to my child,Neni.
Jingle, Andy, Leo, Marbles, and Ina: thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment... :)
Deeju: thanks Deeju, that makes my day...
Hope your child enjoy it... :)
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