Tuesday, July 12, 2011

The Broken House



Raspy whisper of wind is still rumbling
through a house fallen into a ruin
one night storm made it rubble--
salient proof of fall.
I now rare to know,
if resiliency
will rummage
the broken
house!






*Note:
This Nonet is written for One Stop Poetry
Nonet is a form of a poem with a total of nine lines. The first line must have nine syllables, second line eight syllables, third line seven syllables and so on until you end with one syllable.



6 comments:

Reflections said...

Beautiful write... sad, yet offers hope of resiliency. Nice.

Neni said...

thanks..... :)

Carmen Lourdes said...

great write :0)

Sheila said...

great job on the nonet, Neni. I like the alliteration with all of the 'R' words. very good.

salamatahari said...

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Anonymous said...

Like the structure. Cool poem!

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