Monday, July 11, 2011

You Can't Grow a Tree in a Kitchen


You can't grow a tree in a kitchen
on a dining table made of glass
for a tree needs to grow its root
deep down rooted in the earth

You can't grow a tree in a kitchen
where the sun is blocked to enter
for a tree needs shafts of sunlight
to make a food in its green leaves

You can't grow a tree in a kitchen
but you don't believe me and listen
the smile in your face make me worry
for it will turn to be angry and gloomy
as the tree will soon be weary

You can't grow a tree in a kitchen
but you don't believe me and listen
as well as you won't understand
that we should sometimes be kind
to let something go for peace of our mind

You just can't grow a tree in a kitchen
but you don't believe me and listen...




*Note:
This post is written for Thursday Short Story Slam Week-5 Children's Literature. Photo is taken from this website.
Besides, I also submit this post for Thursday Poets Rally Week 48


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Update:



It's surprising that I have won The Perfect Poet Award of Week 48
The following is my award. Thank you for the award, Poets Rally.
Find my Haiku for the award picture as follows... :)





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The Summer is Ready 



dandelion clocks fly free 
as light breeze blows gently 
Oh, summer is ready!


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I vote for Cherlyn!




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15 comments:

Jingle said...

true, love your deep thoughts on the prompt, well done.

:)

MISH said...

Kids do not listen and want to do things their own way ... they always know better ... so adults have to repeat in order to get the message across.
The repetition of the first line in each stanza reminds me of an adult trying to get through to a stubborn child ... very appropriate !

Anonymous said...

This is so true I had my share of not so brilliant ideas as a kid (really I am still having them) but we've got to make those mistakes to grow

mimpi ungu said...

waahh.. indah sekali.. ajari saya bahasa inggris donk..hehee.. :)

salamatahari said...

Gue suka banget yg ini, Nen ...

Neni said...

To all: thank you for the compliment... :)

poets rally said...

love this...



Hope to see you join poets rally week 48 today,

Visit me for details, share and make poetic friends, wow.

Blessings,

Have fun!
xoxox

Neni said...

Poet rally, thanks for your invitation. Hope this is okay that I submit this same poem for the Poets Rally 48...

Anonymous said...

Lovely poem, maybe some bonzai tree...? :)

Marbles in My Pocket said...

There was little doubt where you were coming from on this piece. A very interesting take on the photo. Nicely done!

The Poet said...

Children can indeed be hard-headed, but they usually learn from their mistakes.

Nicely done.

http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/02/freedom-to-love-only-you.html

Vinay Leo R. said...

Maybe we can nourish the seed to a little time, and then replant it in a garden! :)

My Rally Poem ~ A Poetic World

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

anything is welcome in the rally, how cool,

superb entry,
Happy Rally.

deeju said...

Beautiful and elegant way of expressing your views in the form of a poem. I will read it to my child,Neni.

Neni said...

Jingle, Andy, Leo, Marbles, and Ina: thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment... :)

Deeju: thanks Deeju, that makes my day...
Hope your child enjoy it... :)

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